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Laura Stoner's avatar

I have enjoyed this thoroughly. Just ran into a sentence that interrupted my reading flow:

I recommend you re-work this sentence “Actually, entered paints a false picture. “

Recommend something like: Actually, saying that she “entered” the convent at that time creates the wrong impression.

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Dave C's avatar

Great recap and story. You bring the mystics to life. What translation do u quote from? It is quite readable. Peace brother.

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